As I`m sitting and listening to the stories tellers tell, i am captivated and desperately trying to decipher this particular story tellers tale ... So vivid yet so confusing ... With a shocking attention to detail, her descriptive skills will put Patricia Cornwell to shame. She scares me and i wonder why.
The story continues with precision and skill ... There is no going off point for this teller ... not in the least ... Even though we wished she would veer off just a little, she continues to hit the nail on the head ... continues to spread that strange discomfort that is associated with truth .... The silence gets louder until the only thing we can hear is the sound of her unvoiced message ...
Many run away in in fear and confusion ... A little to much to handle ... Others turn up the music so they don't have to listen to the message ... But the question is not if your hair is done properly or if you got your tie on straight ... The question is what do you hear when you stare deep into that looking glass ... It just might be that uncomfortable tale that she very quietly tells ....
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4 comments:
wow great writing, look forward to more!
hey! I love your writing, this is amazing! Really deep stuff and well easy to read :)
Thanks for posting thins..
.. and well the story you posted here, is not only easy to read, but also so TRUE! :)
Take care..
Ingrid
You are a great writer! Have you looked into getting published?
Great writing! You are a talented young man. Keep it up :)
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